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In the narrow stairwell off Tariq Road, Aisha shifted the hot pot of daal against her hip as Yusuf tugged at her hand and a stray shoe rolled under her heel. She caught herself on the peeling wall, the metal tiffin clanging against the railing.
“Ammi, it’s hot,” Yusuf complained, hopping on one foot as his sandal twisted.
“I know, beta, hold tight,” Aisha said, adjusting her grip. The smell of frying onions floated up from a lower flat, mixing with damp concrete and a faint petrol tang from Tariq Road.
Half the corridor on the third-floor landing was taken up by Samina Ahmed’s shoe rack, a tall wooden thing bristling with sandals and heels. Aisha turned sideways, the pot pressed to her ribs, her schoolbag thumping her back, Yusuf’s fingers tangled in hers.
Behind Samina’s door, a television laughed too loudly. Aisha’s own door waited at the far end, its paint worn by years of hands.
She edged past, measuring each step so nothing knocked the rack and sent shoes tumbling. Every day she told herself she would speak to Samina. Every day she swallowed the words.
She needed this flat. The rent fit Bilal’s junior clerk salary. The masjid was a two-minute walk; Huda’s madrasa sat around the corner, its green gate visible from their balcony. If they lost this place, that whole neat circle of school, masjid, market would break.
That morning, before the daal and the stairwell, Aisha had stood on the rooftop under a pale Karachi sky, clipping wet shalwar kameez to the sagging clothesline. The sun had not yet burned through the haze; pigeons shuffled along the parapet. She liked the rooftop at that hour, before the city noise climbed up to meet her.
She had just finished the last shirt when the rooftop door creaked. Samina stepped out, sunglasses perched in her hair, basket of wet clothes on her hip.
“Oh, you’re early,” she said, glancing at the line.
Aisha moved aside. “I’m done. Just these.”
Samina walked to the line, shifted Aisha’s heavier items toward the shadowed side, and pegged her own bright clothes into the centre where the sun would hit strongest. Wooden pegs clicked against the rope. Aisha’s dupatta sagged into the shade.
Aisha opened her mouth, then closed it. Her fingers found her sleeve and smoothed it flat.
Later, after dropping Huda at the madrasa and Yusuf at primary school, she returned to find a silver Corolla parked across the shared driveway, its nose almost touching the gate. Bilal’s small Suzuki sat trapped behind it.
She checked the number plate, jaw tightening. Raza Ahmed’s car. Again.
She pulled out her phone and dialed Bilal. “Your car is blocked,” she said. “It’s Raza’s Corolla.”
On the other end came office noise. “I’m already late,” Bilal said. “Ask them to move it. I’m coming down.”
By the time he reached the ground floor, tie half-knotted, sweat darkening his collar, Aisha and the children were watching from the stairs. Samina opened her door at the sound of his knock, dupatta loose, phone in hand.
“Assalamu alaikum,” Bilal said, breath short. “Your car is blocking the driveway. I have to go.”
Samina frowned, patting at the sideboard for keys. “Wa alaikum assalam. Raza just went to get bread. He’ll be back—”
“I have to sign in by nine,” Bilal cut in. “This keeps happening, baji. There’s a line painted for a reason.”
From the stairs, Yusuf leaned into Aisha’s side. Huda’s fingers curled around the railing. A neighbour from the second floor hovered at the landing, pretending to adjust her scarf.
Samina found the keys, then paused. “We all live here. Sometimes you also leave your bike in front of the gate.”
“That was one time,” Bilal said. “And I moved it when they asked. We have to be considerate.”
“Not a village street, I know,” Samina snapped. “You’ve said it before.”
The words bounced off the tiled walls. Aisha’s ears burned. The children’s eyes flicked between the adults.
After Raza finally reversed the Corolla with an exaggerated sigh, Bilal drove off in a spray of gravel. Aisha’s chest felt tight all morning. By afternoon, she had written a neat complaint on lined paper, the blue ink slightly smudged.
In the dim ground-floor office, a fan rattled overhead. Mr. Farooq, head of the residents’ committee, sat behind a metal desk stacked with files. A framed photo of the building’s owner hung crookedly on the wall: a stern man in a suit, Samina’s uncle.
Samina was already there, arms folded, a printed list in her hand. She barely glanced at Aisha.
“My son can’t even sleep with the pressure cooker whistling at midnight,” Samina said. “And their boy plays cricket in the corridor.”
Aisha’s fingers tightened on her paper. “My children have nowhere else to play,” she said. “And the shoe rack blocks half the landing. The car—”
Mr. Farooq rubbed his forehead. His eyes flicked to the owner’s photo, then to a typed notice on his desk. He tapped it with a pen. “Sisters, we have discussed this many times. The owner is clear. No disturbances. No arguments. Or he will cancel the lease of whichever flat keeps causing trouble.”
Aisha’s breath caught. “Cancel?”
“He has other tenants waiting,” Mr. Farooq said. “Rents on Tariq Road are rising. You know this.”
Aisha’s mind jumped to Huda’s madrasa gate, to the call to prayer that floated into their kitchen at noon. To the cramped, distant flats Bilal had once shown her online near Sohrab Goth, where the rent was lower but the streets looked raw and strange.
Mr. Farooq slid the notice toward them. “This is the last warning.”
Aisha gripped her dupatta so hard her knuckles ached. Samina walked out first, chin high, the paper folded under her arm. Aisha followed, “cancel the lease” ringing in her ears all the way up the stairs.
Because of the warning, the next morning at breakfast Aisha tapped Yusuf’s spoon against his bowl.
“No more running outside our door,” she said, eyes moving between his face and Huda’s. “No racing cars in the corridor. No shouting on the stairs. We stay inside. We can’t afford more complaints.”
Yusuf’s shoulders slumped. “But my ball—”
“You can play on the rooftop when no one is there,” she said. “Not in the landing.”
He pushed his eggs around his plate. Huda watched her mother’s face, then nodded.
Aisha began closing windows during Huda’s Quran recitation so the sound wouldn’t leak into the corridor. She turned off the television if it grew too loud. When she heard Samina’s sandals in the stairwell, she waited, hand on the latch, until the footsteps faded before stepping out.
The rivalry shrank into smaller, sharper acts. One afternoon, Aisha opened her door to water her potted basil plant by the shoe cabinet. Soil was scattered over the tiles, the pot tipped, the thin green stem snapped.
Yusuf appeared at her elbow, eyes wide. “Ali was poking it with a stick,” he said. “I told him stop.”
Aisha knelt, gathering damp soil into her palm. The smell of crushed leaves rose up, bright and bitter. Her tongue felt thick. She righted the pot, pressed the broken stem into the earth, and said nothing.
That evening, Samina’s voice carried through the thin wall as Aisha chopped onions. “Some people treat this building like a village street,” Samina said on the phone, her laugh sharp. “Kids shouting, doors banging. No manners.”
The words slid through the plaster. Aisha’s knife hit the board harder than she meant; onion juice stung her eyes.
At the next madrasa mothers’ circle, Aisha sat on the cool tiled floor with a notebook on her lap while the ustadha spoke about patience in the home. Across the room, Samina leaned close to a friend, whispering. The friend’s eyebrows rose; both glanced briefly toward Aisha, then away when she looked up.
On the walk home, Huda walked a step behind her mother, schoolbag bumping her back.
“Ammi,” she said, choosing her words, “why don’t we ever visit Ali’s house? Other neighbours go sometimes.”
Aisha adjusted her dupatta. “We are busy,” she said. “You have your lessons. I have work.”
Huda’s sandals scuffed the pavement. She didn’t ask again.
One humid night, just after the late prayer at Masjid Umar, voices exploded on the landing. Aisha had just stacked plates from dinner when a fist hammered on their door.
She opened it to find Raza, hair damp with sweat, pointing down the stairwell. “Your boy hit my car with his cricket ball,” he said. “There’s a mark on the bonnet.”
Yusuf appeared behind Aisha, cheeks flushed. “It was an accident,” he said quickly.
Bilal stepped into the doorway, wiping his hands on a towel. “What happened?”
Raza’s voice rose. “You were told before. This is not a playground.”
“It was inside the corridor,” Yusuf said, eyes filling.
Neighbours’ doors opened. Heads peered out. The stairwell magnified every word.
“Talk to me, not my son,” Bilal said, jaw working. “He said it was an accident. We will see the car.”
Samina’s door swung open. “Accident, accident,” she said. “Always an excuse. We have rules here.”
Mr. Farooq arrived in his slippers, hands raised. “Enough,” he said. “Inside, all of you. We can’t have this.”
The next morning, a printed “Final Notice” slid under both doors. At dinner, Bilal spread it on the plastic tablecloth between the plates of lentils and rice.
“If there is one more documented disturbance,” he read, finger underlining, “the owner will terminate the lease at the end of the month.”
Silence settled over the table, broken only by the ceiling fan’s slow creak.
Bilal pushed his plate away. “We can only afford a place near Sohrab Goth if this happens,” he said. “Huda will have to leave her madrasa.”
Huda’s fork froze halfway to her mouth. Yusuf stared at his rice.
Aisha folded the paper in half, then again, each crease sharp. She walked to the shelf, lifted the sugar tin, and slid the notice underneath. When she set the tin down, its metal base clicked against the wood.
With the final notice, Aisha decided to do what she had been avoiding. No more messages through Mr. Farooq. No more muttered complaints.
On a sweltering afternoon, air thick as boiled milk, she washed the lunch dishes and set them to dry. The tap dripped into the steel sink. From the bedroom, the small fan barely stirred the hot air.
“Huda, keep Yusuf inside,” she said, drying her hands on her dupatta. “No opening the door unless it’s me or Baba.”
Huda nodded from the floor, where she was helping Yusuf line up toy cars. Her eyes followed her mother to the door.
Aisha stepped into the corridor. The building’s silence pressed close, broken only by a television below and the far-off honk of traffic. She smoothed her dupatta, lifted her hand, and knocked on Samina’s door with three firm taps.
The door opened halfway. Cool air and the smell of frying spices drifted out. Behind Samina, the television blared; Ali lay on the floor, rolling a toy truck over a cushion.
“We need to talk about the complaints,” Aisha said.
Samina leaned against the doorframe, arms crossed, bangles clinking. “Now?” she asked. “I’m busy.”
“It won’t take long,” Aisha said. “We both got the final notice. If one more thing happens, they will throw us out.”
Samina’s mouth tightened. “Then stop letting your boy play cricket in the corridor.”
Aisha’s fingers curled. “And you can stop parking across the driveway. And move this rack so we can walk without breaking our necks.” She gestured at the shoe rack.
Samina’s eyes narrowed. “This is a proper building, not a basti. There are rules. No noise. No children running wild.” She mimicked the shrill whistle of a pressure cooker. “That sound at midnight, who can sleep?”
Heat flooded Aisha’s face. “My children can’t breathe without someone calling it ‘disturbance’,” she said. “You complain about every step they take.”
“They are not the only ones living here,” Samina shot back. “My uncle invested in this building. People with standards live here.”
On the staircase, a neighbour from upstairs paused, phone in hand, pretending to scroll. Her eyes flicked between the two women.
Ali tugged at Samina’s kameez. “Ammi, rooftop?” he asked.
“Later,” Samina snapped, not looking down.
Huda opened Aisha’s door a crack. Yusuf peered around her, fingers gripping the frame. Aisha saw their faces, small and still.
“They hear everything,” she said, nodding toward them. “Every word.”
Samina glanced at the children, then back at Aisha. Her voice stayed hard. “If you can’t manage in a proper building, maybe you should find another.”
The words hung between them.
Samina pulled the door closer. The latch clicked shut inches from Aisha’s face.
Aisha stared at the wood grain, feeling the echo of the click in her chest. After a few seconds, she turned and walked back to her own door, closing it gently.
Inside, Huda and Yusuf stood in the hallway, cars forgotten. Aisha bent, picked up Yusuf’s cricket bat from the corner, and leaned it high against the wall, out of his reach. Yusuf’s eyes followed the bat, his mouth opening then closing. He said nothing.
Because of the slammed door, the next week slid past in a fog of avoidance.
Aisha listened for Samina’s footsteps before unlocking her own door. If she heard the jangle of keys, she stepped back and waited until the sound faded.
When they ended up in the lift together once, Aisha stared at the floor numbers, counting the seconds. The air between them felt as tight as the metal walls.
Outside, the sky over Karachi grew heavier each day. Monsoon clouds stacked on the horizon. The air pressed against skin.
One afternoon, wind pushed dust through the balcony grilles, coating the rail with grit. Aisha wiped it away with her dupatta and checked the time. She was late to collect Huda from the madrasa.
On the street, rickshaws buzzed. As she stepped out of the building, another madrasa mother waved from beside Samina’s Corolla.
“We’re going that way,” the woman called. “Come with us. There’s space.”
Samina sat in the driver’s seat, sunglasses on, Ali strapped in the back.
Aisha hesitated, then shook her head. “No, thank you. I’ll take a rickshaw.”
She lifted her hand to hail one, the wind tugging at her scarf. The first fat drops of rain hit the dusty road, leaving dark circles.
On the way back with Huda and Yusuf squeezed beside her, the sky opened. Rain hammered the rickshaw roof, deafening. Water rushed along the gutters, brown and fast. Horns blared as bikes stalled.
By the time they reached their lane, water swirled around their ankles. The guard’s chair sat empty by the gate. The ground-floor lights flickered.
“Hold my hands,” Aisha said, gripping both children as they splashed through the water toward the stairwell. Their shoes squeaked on the wet steps.
On the third-floor landing, Aisha fumbled with her keys, hair dripping, dupatta plastered to her shoulders. The fluorescent tube flickered, then with a loud click the power cut out. The stairwell fell into dimness, lit only by grey light from the small window.
Inside their flat, the air felt close without the fan. Aisha lit a candle on the counter. The children hovered near the door, listening to the rain drum on tin roofs and the echo of neighbours’ voices.
Then a sharp metallic groan rattled the building, like metal twisting. A high, panicked scream sliced through the rain.
“Ali! Ali! Somebody help, he’s in the lift!”
Samina’s voice, rising from below, cracked on the last word.
Aisha froze in the hallway. Huda’s fingers clamped around her arm. Yusuf pressed his face into her wet kurta.
Another neighbour’s door opened. Someone muttered, “The water is rising near the lift.”
Aisha looked toward the dark stairwell, where the screams bounced up, then back at her own open doorway. Inside was light, dry floor, her children. Outside was cold, dirty water and Samina’s voice, raw with fear.
Her heart thudded, fast and uneven.
She reached for the small torch in the shoe cabinet, its plastic casing cool in her damp hand.
“Huda,” she said, voice low but steady, “lock the door after me. Don’t open it for anyone except Baba. Keep Yusuf with you.”
Huda’s eyes widened. “Ammi—”
“Do as I say.” Aisha pressed the torch into her palm for a moment, then took it back. “If the candle goes out, stay near the window.”
She stepped into the stairwell. The air was cooler, the smell of wet concrete strong. The torch beam cut a pale path down the steps.
On the ground floor, water rushed like a shallow stream, swirling with leaves and bits of plastic. The lift doors shuddered as someone inside kicked them, the sound hollow.
Samina stood on the lowest stair, hem soaked, dupatta half off her head. She was pounding the call button, knuckles white.
“Ali, beta! Answer me!” she cried. From behind the doors, a small voice sobbed.
Two teenage boys hovered nearby, bare feet in the water, eyes darting between the control panel and the pooling water. A loose wire hung near the wall, sparking faintly.
“Move back!” Aisha shouted, her sandals slapping in the water as she splashed toward them. “Turn off the main switch!” She pointed toward the side room where the fuse box hung.
One boy stared. The other jolted into motion and ran to the fuse box. The metal door creaked as he yanked it open.
Aisha climbed onto the second stair, lifting her feet out of the water. She gripped Samina’s shoulder to steady her. Samina flinched, then leaned into it.
“Ali, can you hear me?” Aisha called. “Say something.”
A muffled wail came from inside. “Ammi! It’s dark! The water—” His words broke into sobs.
In the fuse room, switches snapped down one by one. The faint hum of the building’s machinery died.
Together, Aisha and Samina wedged their fingers into the narrow gap between the lift doors. The cold metal bit into their skin. They pulled. The doors resisted, then shifted a fraction, scraping.
“Again,” Aisha said through gritted teeth.
They heaved. The gap widened to a hand’s width. Dirty water sloshed against their calves. The torch beam trembled on the metal.
Through the crack, Aisha saw Ali crouched on the floor of the lift, knees to his chest, face streaked with tears. Water seeped under the door behind him, pooling around his sandals.
“It’s okay, beta,” she called. “We’re here.”
The gap was still too small for him to slip through.
“You,” Aisha said to the second boy, who stood frozen, “run to Masjid Umar. Tell them a child is trapped in the lift. Ask the prayer leader to send help.”
The boy nodded and sprinted into the rain.
Minutes stretched. Rain hammered the entrance grille. Neighbours gathered on the stairs, murmuring, some clutching their children back from the water’s edge. Someone held a battery lamp aloft.
Aisha’s fingers ached from gripping the door. Samina’s breathing came in short bursts, fogging the metal.
“Ammi,” Ali whimpered. “I’m scared.”
Samina’s shoulders shook. “I’m here, jaan,” she said, voice breaking. “I’m here.”
Footsteps pounded in the stairwell. Two young men from the masjid burst in, trousers rolled to their knees. One carried a crowbar.
“Where is the main switch?” one asked.
“Off,” Aisha said, nodding toward the dark fuse box.
They planted their feet in the water, gripped the edges of the doors above the women’s hands, and heaved. Metal screeched. The gap widened, inch by inch, until it was wide enough for a child.
Aisha leaned into the cold, damp cage, the smell of rust and fear thick in her nose, hooked her arms under Ali’s, and lifted. He was heavier than Yusuf, dead weight with terror, but she pulled until his sandals cleared the lip of the lift.
Samina grabbed him, collapsing back onto the stair with him in her lap. She wrapped both arms around him, pressing his head into her chest, her body curled over him.
“Alhamdulillah, alhamdulillah,” she whispered into his wet hair, over and over, the words tumbling between sobs.
Ali clung to her, fingers digging into her shoulders. His small body shook.
Neighbours exhaled in a ragged chorus. Someone said, “Ya Allah,” under their breath.
Aisha stepped back onto the stair, her legs trembling. Water dripped from her hem. Her hands stung where the metal had bitten; thin red lines were already raising.
Samina looked up at her. For a moment, all the tightness in her face fell away. Her eyes shone, wide and raw. She reached out, caught Aisha’s wet hand with both of hers, and pressed it to her own forehead.
Her fingers were cold and shaking. Tears mixed with rain on her cheeks as she held Aisha’s hand there for a heartbeat, in front of everyone.
Because of the rescue and the long evening that followed, the building’s corridors smelled of detergent and damp concrete by night.
After the lift incident, the men wedged the doors open and tied them with a rope. The guard returned, muttering about the water. Buckets and mops appeared from every flat.
Aisha and her children dragged pails of murky water toward the drain at the end of the corridor. Bilal wrung out rags into a larger bucket, his shirt stuck to his back. His eyes met Aisha’s once, lingering for a second on the red lines on her hands, then dropped to the floor he was scrubbing.
Samina appeared at their door balancing two steel trays of steaming biryani and a tall flask of chai. Her hair was damp, scarf hastily pinned. Without many words, she stepped into Aisha’s kitchen, set the trays on the counter, and tied her dupatta tighter.
“You haven’t cooked,” she said, glancing at the empty stove. “Eat this later.”
Before Aisha could answer, Samina picked up a spare mop leaning against the wall and stepped back into the corridor. Side by side, they moved the mop heads across the tiles, pushing dirty water toward the drain. Their skirts brushed; their bangles clinked.
Children wove around them, bare feet leaving wet prints. Ali stuck close to Samina’s leg, one hand clutching her kameez. He kept casting quick looks at Aisha, then at the open, dead lift.
When they reached the shared balcony, puddles glistened in the low spots. Aisha’s laundry rack stood in the middle, its legs soaking.
Samina bent, gripped the metal frame, and lifted it onto a higher ledge away from the damp. “This spot stays drier,” she said, almost offhand.
Aisha watched her for a moment, then nodded. “Shukriya,” she said quietly.
Down in the lane, Raza stepped into the drizzle to move his Corolla away from the drained basement. He called up the stairwell, his voice echoing. “Baji, use my covered parking space for your Suzuki until the water clears. The corner is still flooded.”
Bilal wiped his forehead with his sleeve and leaned over the railing. “That’s okay, bhai,” he called.
“Use it,” Raza insisted. “The other side is dry.”
Mr. Farooq stood in his doorway, leaning on the frame, watching the small river of dirty water snake toward the drain. He held the “Final Notice” in his hand, the paper limp from damp fingers. Without a word, he tore it in half, then into quarters, and slipped the pieces into his pocket.
Later, in the kitchen, the families ate together in shifts. The biryani’s warm spices cut through the smell of damp. Children sat cross-legged on the floor with plates on their knees. Adults leaned against doorframes, chai cups warming their hands.
No one mentioned the complaints. When their eyes met, they held a second longer than before, then dropped back to their plates.
The next morning, Karachi woke under a grey, dripping sky. Puddles gleamed in the potholes; the air smelled of wet dust and exhaust.
On the small balcony, Aisha stood with a chipped cup of chai, its steam curling into the cool air. Traffic on Tariq Road moved slower than usual, tyres hissing through shallow water.
From below, the building door creaked open. Samina emerged, car keys in hand, Ali bouncing beside her with his schoolbag thumping his back.
Aisha rested her elbows on the balcony rail, the cup warm between her palms.
Samina shaded her eyes with one hand and looked up. When she spotted Aisha, she cupped her hands around her mouth. Her voice floated up, clear over the hum of engines.
“Aisha apa! The streets are still bad. There’s space in the car for Huda. Come with us.”
For a moment, Aisha stayed still, the steam from her chai rising past her face. Huda’s madrasa bag hung by the door behind her, already packed. She could picture the flooded bus stops, the packed rickshaws, Huda’s shalwar plastered to her ankles.
She nodded once, short and sure, and turned inside.
“Huda,” she called, setting the cup on the counter. “Get your uniform. You’re going with Ali today.”
Huda’s eyes lit up. “With Ali?” she asked.
“Yes. Quickly.” Aisha pulled the ironed uniform from the hanger, helped her into it, and smoothed her hijab over her hair, fingers gentle at her temples.
In the kitchen, she wrapped two hot parathas in foil and tucked them into a small plastic container.
“Yusuf, finish your breakfast,” she said, ruffling his damp hair as she slipped on her sandals. “We’ll go to school after.”
He chewed faster, eyes darting between his sister and the door.
On the stairs, the air was cool and smelled faintly of last night’s detergent. The shoe rack still lined half the landing, but Aisha moved past it without turning sideways, the container of parathas warm in her hand.
In the lane, Samina stood by the Corolla, unlocking the doors. Ali sat in the backseat, window rolled halfway down, face freshly washed, eyes bright.
“There’s a lot of water near the main road,” Samina said as Aisha approached. “Better they go together.”
Aisha opened the back door. “Go on,” she said to Huda. “Sit with Ali.”
Huda climbed in, her bag bumping against Ali’s. He shifted over, making space, their shoulders touching.
Aisha leaned into the front window and placed the container on the dashboard. The foil-wrapped parathas bumped softly against the plastic.
“For the kids,” she said. “Breakfast was rushed.”
Samina’s hand rested on the steering wheel. She looked at the container, then at Aisha. A small smile tugged at the corner of her mouth.
“JazakAllah,” she said. “We’ll drop them at the gate.”
A horn blared behind them. A motorbike squeezed past, spraying a thin fan of water. Samina started the engine. The car eased into the slow stream of traffic, tyres hissing.
At the school gate, she pulled over as close as the puddles allowed. Huda and Ali hopped out under a single umbrella Samina had pulled from the backseat. They huddled close, bags pressed together, and ran toward the entrance, splashing through shallow water.
Aisha watched from the open car door, one hand on the frame. Beside her, Samina stood with the umbrella handle still warm in her grip.
“Assalamu alaikum,” Aisha said.
“Wa alaikum assalam,” Samina replied.
They closed their doors almost at the same time. As Samina merged back into the honking, humming river of traffic, Aisha turned toward the lane, the faint smell of paratha and wet asphalt following her up the stairs. At the third-floor landing, she reached for Yusuf’s hand before he could dart ahead, their footsteps soft on the clear tiles as they walked past the shoe rack together.
The end
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